Concluding Paragraph

Parts of the Concluding Paragraph

In this resource page, you will learn about the two major parts (and purposes) of the concluding paragraph:

1. To revisit the main ideas of the essay
2. To provide the reader with closure

Revisit the Main Ideas of the Essay

No conclusion could ever serve its purpose without being somehow connected to (and drawing conclusions from) the main ideas discussed in the paper. It’s always a good idea to revisit some of the main points discussed- perhaps especially the thesis statement.

Be careful though. One thing you don’t want to do is restate the thesis statement, topic sentences, or supporting details word-for-word. Your readers already got that information from the introductory and body paragraphs. Simply restating it again would add little value to the essay while adding a lot of extra thoughts that have already been shared.

What your readers do want and need, however, is to be reminded of where they have been (the topics that were covered) with the added benefit of context- a sense of how what they have read applies to them and/or should change their outlook on that given topic.

Let’s look at a couple of examples to illustrate. For added context, first, take a moment to review the sample body paragraph from last week’s Writing Lessons:

The testimony of experts has shown me that increased awareness about the conditions in which thinking errors occur is a great first step toward discovering ways to overcome them. Many experts in the field of psychology have highlighted the importance of not only correctly identifying the thinking errors we suffer from, but also the conditions in which they tend to occur most frequently in our lives. As Dr. John M. Grohol explained in his article “10 Proven Methods for Fixing Cognitive Distortions,” “Much like a judge overseeing a trial, [you] must remove yourself from the emotionality of the episode of irrational thinking in order to examine the evidence more objectively. A thorough examination of an experience allows you to identify the basis for your distorted thoughts.” In other words, before a thinking error can be successfully overcome, it must first be analysed as objectively as possible so the cause of the thinking error (and the conditions that tend to cause it) can be identified and modified. I am confident that a consistent analysis of the conditions in which my thinking error of giving up occurs will help me to control and eventually overcome this specific thinking error.

Provide Closure

The final thing your concluding paragraph should do is provide your reader with some closure. This is not necessarily closure in the sense that everything is answered or explained. Rather it is closure in the sense that your reader senses that the discussion that has been happening throughout the essay is complete.

There are many ways you can do this, but two of the most effective ways are to:

1. Link the concluding paragraph to the introductory paragraph

   This was already somewhat discussed in the section above. You definitely don’t want to restate your thesis statement word-for-word. However, you can give your reader a feeling of returning back to where you started when you repeat a word or phrase you used in the introductory paragraph.

   For example, in the Introductory Paragraph lessons, one of the hook examples included a personal experience related to the topic or thesis statement:

   I can remember vividly the first time I truly felt like giving up. It was in a Physical Education class in primary school and my teacher, Mr. Scott, needed me to successfully spike a volleyball over the net before the end of class that day. If I did not, I would not pass the class. Though his request was simple, to me it felt completely impossible. I had failed to fulfill his requirement for the past four days. Why would this day be any different? “What’s the use in trying?” I thought to myself. “I might as well just give up now and not even try instead of trying and failing in front of my peers.” I didn’t realize it at the time, but what I was suffering from in that moment was something far worse than a simple lack of athleticism. I had a thinking error.

   A way you could tie this introductory paragraph to the conclusion would be to add a couple sentences like this to the concluding paragraph:

   Sometimes I wonder what the outcome would have been had I stepped back and looked at my thinking error of giving up when I was in Mr. Scott’s Physical Education class. Perhaps instead of opting not to try, I would have had the strength to recognize the conditions that surrounded my thinking error and tried harder to overcome them. I am thankful for what I know now though. I firmly believe that as I continue to step back and examine (and fight back against) the conditions that surround my unique thinking error that I will have the power and confidence to not give up again.

   Notice the reference to the experience in Mr. Scott’s physical education class was shared in the introductory paragraph hook? Notice the way it is given additional context by its being tied to what has been learned about overcoming thinking errors?

   Ponder and Record

   • What part of your introductory paragraph hook could you potentially revisit in your concluding paragraph?

   So, what does a concluding paragraph look like when it combines revisiting main ideas and providing closure. Here is one example:

   Example 1

   All of the expert testimonies I have examined have shown me that there is great value and strength in everyone, no matter their thinking error, taking a step back to examine not only what the thinking error is, but what conditions typically surround it and perhaps even cause it. Sometimes I wonder what the outcome would have been had I stepped back and looked at my thinking error of giving up when I was in Mr. Scott’s Physical Education class. Perhaps instead of opting not to try, I would have had the strength to recognize the conditions that surrounded my thinking error and tried harder to overcome them. I am thankful for what I know now though. I firmly believe that as I continue to step back and examine (and fight back against) the conditions that surround my unique thinking error that I will have the power and confidence to not give up again.

2. Give the reader something to think about

   The topics people write about are rarely unconnected to larger issues. One way you could conclude your essay is by leaving your reader with a larger question to consider-- something he or she could ponder for a bit after reading your essay. That question doesn’t have to be directly tied to an introductory paragraph hook, but many times, it’s a good place to return to (as the last example shows).

   To give context to this example, let’s first return to another example hook from the Introductory Paragraph lessons

   Take a moment to think back on one of the most challenging times of your life. What was it like? What caused it and what made it so hard? What impact did that difficult situation have on your mind? What thoughts did you have (and perhaps still have) as you worked through that difficult situation? Hard times are hard no matter what. A lot of times they are actually made harder though by our own minds. Keeping a healthy state of mind is hard and it can be even harder when going through challenges. This is largely due to the tendency we all have to commit thinking errors-false ways of thinking and viewing the world.

   A way you could use this example in your concluding paragraph to provide closure and give your reader something to think about is this:

   To illustrate, let’s return and reflect again for a moment on a challenging time in your life. What was it like? What caused it and what made it so hard? What impact did this situation have on your mind and what types of thoughts did it cause you to have? More importantly, could these thoughts have been avoided had you known you were suffering from a thinking error? Though you can’t go back in time, what could this new knowledge about thinking errors do for you moving forward?

   Notice how this conclusion hearkens back to questions asked in the introduction while also giving the reader some additional questions to ponder? Though a small addition, it nonetheless does the important job of leaving the reader with something new to think about while still providing closure.

   Ponder and Record

   • What question or thought to ponder could you leave your reader with in your own concluding paragraph?

   So, what does a concluding paragraph look like when it combines revisiting main ideas and providing closure. Here is another example:

   Example 2

   All of the expert testimonies I have examined have shown me that there is great value and strength in everyone, no matter their thinking error, taking a step back to examine not only what the thinking error is, but what conditions typically surround it and perhaps even cause it. To illustrate, let’s return and reflect once again on a challenging time in your life. What was it like? What caused it and what made it so hard? What impact did this situation have on your mind and what types of thoughts did it cause you to have? More importantly, could these thoughts have been avoided had you known you were suffering from a thinking error? Though you can’t go back in time, what could this new knowledge about thinking errors do for you moving forward?